Feedback Retreat Fairies and Wood Nymphs! August Retreat Rundown 2024

Our happy campers from the August Feedback and Revision Retreat 2024

What a treat to meet so many talented and inspiring writers and to help them tackle the dreaded second draft with some useful tools! With writers from their twenties to almost eighty we had libraries worth of shared wisdom to delve into to help each other make our projects the very best they can be.

We honed in on the themes and worked on scene lists to help us see more clearly the structural issues that needed to be addressed, before looking at cleaning up our prose and then learning about how to write a pitch and a synopsis. Lots of brainwork this retreat, with writers sharing their work in small feedback groups and/or receiving individual feedback with me, to help get those first few pages shining like beacons to potential publishers.

Look at that concentration!

But it wasn’t all hard work. We had yoga and breathing to relax and restore our bodies and minds, beautiful surroundings for walks and adventures, and of course, thanks to the Wonder Woman that is Gay Liddington lots of delicious nurturing food to keep our bellies full and our spirits happy. Gay’s own memoir Will I Ever Be Who I Am is being released early in 2025 – watch this space. Not just the best cook in the world, also a talented writer, brave advocate and healer through story. Food magician!

Plus our lovely special helpers, Liana and Natasha who did all the hard work of cleaning up. THANK YOU!

With our tummies and minds full, we were glad of the lovely, if cool, weather to take walks around the stunning location and refresh ourselves with the beauty of nature, listen to the birds and the sound of running water, leaves rustling in the wind, making friends with the little yellow robins hopping around the cabins and pademelons that bounded away when we got too close.

TESTIMONIALS
Here’s what retreaters had to say about their weekend of writing, yoga, feasting and friends.

‘A once in a lifetime retreat that won’t be my last!’ Selena Wallace August 2024

‘A very well organised retreat, beautiful peaceful surroundings and nurturing food. The writing sessions were informative, practical, relevant to writers of all stages and ages. Thank you for a fabulous weekend.’ Alina Hughes August 2024

‘I would encourage all those interested in writing, reading and a truly unique experience to come to a Relax and Write Retreat.’ Indrani Ganguly August 2024

‘A peaceful, beautiful place to connect with others and reconnect with yourself and to inspire better writing, but also to gain confidence moving forward. Beautiful location, excellent food and most of all, a truly inspiring group of women.’ Isabel Coe August 2024

‘This retreat was a wonderful opportunity to focus on my writing project in a relaxed supportive environment with like-minded women. Thanks Edwina for sharing your expertise and knowledge in such an open-hearted way.’ Jen Barrkman August 2024

‘The food was perfect! Nutritious, tasty, interesting and nurturing.’ Alina Hughes August 2024

The most magical part of these retreats is the connections made between writing friends who help and support each other to bring their creative babies to full and beautiful fruition in the world. Hooray for new writing buddies I say! THANK YOU to all the wonderful, wise, inspiring and creative women who make these retreats such a joy for me and Gay.

We work hard to make these retreats a nurturing and uplifting experience for all who attend but ultimately it is the open hearts, kindness and generosity of those who come along that create the magic we all enjoy. THANK YOU new friends! And old ones too 🙂

As is traditional, we finished our weekend full of words with some images, creating collages to open our eyes to the goodness coming our way.

UPCOMING RETREATS

Are you ready for a retreat?

Our next Springbrook Weekend Intensive is the Memoir and Life Writing Retreat 18 – 20 October. This retreat is perfect for those working on stories based on life and for new writers wanting to get started and finally get some stories out of their heads and onto the page. All the info HERE. Still a few places left but CONTACT EDWINA to make sure there is a place for you before booking.

And keep an eye on my UPCOMING RETREATS PAGE for retreats in 2025, including:

February 10 – 16Heavenly Hoi An – Vietnam Transformational Writing Retreat

April 4 – 6 SPRINGBROOK – Memoir and Life Writing Retreat

June 23 – 29 Blissful Bali – Bali Transformational Writing Retreat

August 8 – 10 SPRINGBROOK – Feedback and Revision Retreat

October 10 – 17 Incredible Italy – Italy Transformational Writing Retreat

November 7 – 12 Beautiful Byron Bay – Writing for Wellness Transformational Writing Retreat – info coming soon!

Want to know more? Just drop me a line!

We always have a wonderful time. I feel so lucky to get to run these retreats where I meet the very best kind of people — writers, dreamers, creators! THANK YOU!

Lots of love

Edwina xx

BLISSFUL BALI BLOSSOMS! 2024 Bali Writing Retreat Rundown.

Happy campers with our vision boards, freshly minted.

The magic of Bali and the kindness of the people worked their miracles again this year on retreat. With a small group due to some last-minute mishaps, (poor chookies, luckily we ask all participants to hold comprehensive travel insurance) we were able to spread out over the beautiful grounds of Bali Ecostay and enjoy the peace and privacy of our exclusive use of the unique open air bungalows, lulled by the ever-present music of the stream running through the property and powering our lights. With water drinkable straight from the taps, sourced from Bali Ecostay’s own spring, and all organic bath products as well as delicious food prepared with love and sourced from their own incredible permaculture gardens and food forest, we were able to totally relax into the Bali of days gone by.

Every day the local elder, dressed in traditional garb, prepared floral offerings and delivered them to our bungalows, the temples in the gardens, and to the sacred waterfall, making every day feel blessed indeed. On our first day the local women dressed us up in traditional kebayas with sashes and taught us how to prepare our own floral tributes then led us to the temple to offer them to the gods of the property, the river and the village, to bless us all, and all the staff. We even blessed the kitchen utensils! To close the ceremony, we daubed our foreheads and throats with grains of rice, tucked flowers behind our ears and scattered them through our hair. Such a beautiful ritual and an honour to be included in this sacred ceremony.

As usual on our writing retreats, our greatest joy is watching new writing friendships blossom. Writing can be a lonely business so connecting with other like-minded souls in a supported environment is a special element of these writing adventures away from home. From Victoria, with 35 books under her belt, to Carol, right at the start of her writing journey, to Kylie straight out of the outback sharing her hilarious stories about bulls, to Yvonne writing of her battle with debilitating illness, to Yuan fascinating us with stories of her great-grandmother who was a Chinese pirate of the south seas, we had an intriguing group, growing closer through the week, until we all felt like sisters by the last morning, sad to say goodbye. So much creativity and inspiration and many epiphanies about projects underway and new projects to begin. Because all activities are optional on our retreats you are free to create the retreat you most need – lots of learning or lots of writing time. Interaction or time alone.

Our mornings began with gentle yoga in the spectacular open-air yoga shala, a mandala of fresh petals at the centre, incense and flowers scenting the air. Then to a plentiful breakfast – fresh tropical fruit, coconut yoghurt, toast, eggs, tomatoes, fresh delicious greens, coffee grown on the property, ginger tea for me, plus pancakes with butter and sugar palm syrup and homemade jam and other sweet treats depending on the day. Yes, we were stuffed like Christmas geese! Luckily many scenic walks through the food forests to the waterfall and spectacular rice paddies are easy to find. And writing takes energy too!

The morning workshops were fun and interactive as well as informative and inspirational, incorporating guided meditations to get our retreaters writing up a storm. From freewriting to carefully curated prompts, to sharing craft knowledge and know-how on structure and all aspects of creative writing, these workshops incorporate sharing and discussion as all voices and input is valued and appreciated. It’s basically an entire university course on creative writing crammed into a week, so retreaters needed to put on their brain-caps, and wear their happy pants too.

Afternoons were reserved for rest, writing, adventures, swims in the waterfall, and one on one feedback sessions with Kerstin and I, plus tarot readings later in the week to offer new insights as participants prepare to move into a new phase of their lives after the retreat – empowered and believing in their right to tell their stories, rewrite the past and create a brave new future of their own making.

As the sun set each day, we gathered again in the yoga shala for some calming yoga breathing (pranayama) to clear our minds, relax deeply and prepare for a restful night. Cocktails and glasses of wine were ordered as our lovely kitchen ladies brought out our dinners, each one delicious and followed by scrumptious desserts. Everyone had their favourite. I love the black sticky rice pudding with hot coconut cream. Kerstin craved the lime dairy free cheesecake, or was it the dairy free chocolate gelato or chocolate pie? Let’s just say we feasted happily without having to lift a finger!

First collage by the very lovely artist and writer, Julie Parsons

On the final day we discussed publishing options and got our heads around submitting our work and, as is traditional in the final session, we left words behind and used collage to create vision boards for the future using images and colour. We shared what we’d created and our dreams, laughed and encouraged each other as we set intentions for the lives we want to lead, and the pain we want to leave behind. Our final night bonfire took our pain and our dreams to heaven as we stood together by the rice fields dancing with fireflies, creating light of our own. Our readings night saw both laughter and tears, with people sharing work and testing their voices, inspiring us all.

As always, I found this retreat richly rewarding, connecting with many special writing souls who gave as much as they received. So thank you my dear new friends for sharing this special week with Kerstin and I and for giving so much of yourselves, for supporting each other, for listening and for speaking up, for your writing, your inspiring creativity and your kindness, laughter and smiles. 

I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again, it’s the people who come along on these retreats that make them so special. THANK YOU!

Are you ready for a grand adventure? Bookings are now open for Blissful Bali 2025 June 23 – 29. All the info here.

In 2025 we have Vietnam in February (10 – 16) also open for bookings, Bali in June, Italy in October and introducing our first Writing for Wellness Retreat in Byron Bay in November. You can book both Vietnam and Bali now and we’re working on getting the others up as soon as possible.

Super keen? Make sure you’re the first to know by joining the waitlist for your preferred retreat. Just drop me a line and I’ll add you to the list. And for all the latest retreat news, writing advice and publishing opportunities subscribe to my newsletter.

Put yourself in this picture and treat yourself to the writing adventure of a lifetime!

Now write like the wind!

Lots of love,

Edwina xx