writing advice

What’s holding your story up?

All narratives are based around a quest or question of some kind to propel the story forward.

Short stories only need one, usually around a specific period of time, a changing moment in a character’s life – the moment of epiphany, release or realisation.

Long form narratives like novels, memoirs and all narrative non-fiction, thrive on many quests or questions. Each scene has its own, each character has their own, but in order for the whole narrative to hang together and be a compelling read, the author needs to consider a CENTRAL QUEST OR QUESTION that is sustained throughout the entire story to unify and drive it forward.

This central quest/ion encompasses, and lies above or underneath, every scene and every other question or character goal.

Character goals play into the overall quest/ion but are not the same.

What could happen to start these friends on a novel-worthy adventure?

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To get started on finding your central quest/ion, focus in on your main character, your protagonist. What are their goals?

What do they want to achieve/encounter on the physical/material plane? Eg: Sophie wants to become a movie star.

What is their emotional goal? Eg Sophie wants everyone to adore her and for men to fall at her feet.

What is their spiritual goal? To be seen.

Knowing the answers to these questions, as well as defining your character’s strengths and weaknesses, will help you write this character as a fully developed agent in their story. But they are not the central quest/ion.

The central quest/ion is triggered by the inciting incident or call to adventure that sets this story in motion.

EG: In Sophie’s story she’s finally offered a main role in a film but it’s for a notoriously abusive director.

For Dear Madman the central question arises as soon as the man arrives at the family farm and is given work.

In my first novel Thrill Seekers the central question is sparked by the death of the brothers’ father.

WHAT IS YOUR INCITING INCIDENT? What unexpected external event, throws your character’s world into chaos and sets them off on an unforeseen trajectory?

From this inciting incident brainstorm a few quests or questions.

EG. What price will Sophie pay for pursuing her dream of stardom?

In Dear Madman – How will the meeting of this disturbed man and this family impact them all?

In Thrill Seekers – Will Brian be able to take care of his brother?

Make these overall quest/ions as open-ended as possible.

Here are a few more examples:

In a memoir – Will Marilyn ever find the son she was forced to give up for adoption as a teenager?

In a suspense novel – Will the protagonist survive?

In a romance – Will the protagonists ever come together and be happy?

These central quest/ions are usually simple but there is a lot at stake. Ultimately this quest/ion is what joins disparate sections of your story and keeps readers turning pages right up till the end.

WHAT IS YOUR CENTRAL QUEST/ION?

Will Bob’s new pants impress the ladies?

Make sure you have the right central quest/ion.

Recently I had the pleasure of editing an extremely well-crafted commercial women’s fiction MS with “Sisters” in the title. Central to the story is a crime which directly impacts all three sisters. The author’s central quest was to discover what really happened with the crime, which of course is an important part of this story. BUT at its heart this book is about the sisters, and how the crime will impact upon them and their relationships with each other.

So instead of the central question being “What really happened in this crime?” a better question would be “How will this crime impact these three sisters?”.

The focus on the sisters will ultimately give the author much more scope for developing the story further, as the crime places great pressure on the sisters’ relationships with each other.

CHECK your central quest or question. Is it serving the whole book, or just a section?

Remember each new chapter or scene will have its own question, but all of these play into the overarching narrative driver of the central quest/ion.

EXAMPLES

Sophie’s stardom story:

HOPE – Sophie won’t have to succumb to the casting couch and will retain her self-respect and integrity and become a star.

FEAR – Sophie will suffer abuse, sell herself short and become a bitter and twisted wannabe waitress.

Dear Madman

HOPE- We hope the interaction will be positive for them all.

FEAR – We fear it will end in an horrific tragedy.

Thrill Seekers

HOPE – We hope Brian will do a good job, and both brothers will grow to healthy, happy adulthood.

FEAR – We fear Brian will fail and his brother will die.

Make sure that the worst that can happen will at the very least FEEL like the end of the world for your character, even if it’s just not getting a boyfriend. Make sure you have enough at stake.

HOPE AND FEAR

Once you have your central quest/ion it’s easy then to manipulate reader emotion by moving them in one scene between HOPE – that there will be a good outcome and FEAR – that the very worst will happen.

EG. For our memoir: Marilyn writes to the hospital where she had the child to find details of the adoption – HOPE – she’ll find her son.

They reply that all the records were lost in a fire twenty years ago – FEAR – she’ll never find him.

In Dear Madman – The man is fired and sent from the farm – HOPE – the family will be free of him and return to their normal hardworking but happy life.

BUT then the man gets work at the farm next door and spies on the family – FEAR – they’ve made things worse and triggered a psychotic man’s revenge.

In Thrill Seekers – Brian tells the drug dealer not to give his little brother any drugs – HOPE – he’s doing his job as a big brother and looking out for Douggie.

But then the drug dealer gives Douggie acid anyway – FEAR – things aren’t looking good. Douggie flips out and Brian looks the other way

WHAT IS YOUR HOPE AND FEAR?

Now you have your central quest/ion, work out your hope and your fear. Look at what you’ve already written. Is there movement between hope and fear? If not go back and insert some actions that will prompt either hope or fear.

For more on the secret to suspense – HOPE + FEAR = SUSPENSE – see HERE.

As you write on, make sure you have that ongoing movement between hope and fear in every scene, in every page if you can find a way.

Remember, every character has their own goals that have their own quest/ions. Each chapter and each scene have their own as well. As you go through your story, make a note on whether a scene ends on hope or fear then move us to the opposite in the following scene.

Through it all, like a giant darning needle sewing the whole story together, you’ll have the thread of your central quest/ion, uniting all the elements and drawing them tightly into one compelling narrative.

Hope you’ll find that useful. Now get to work and apply this theory to your story. Did it work for you? Let me know!

Remember to use the search bar here and my Writers’ Index to find articles I’ve written on craft over the past decades. Type your craft issue key word eg, Character or Plot, into the search bar and find all related articles.

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If you’d like me to help you sort out your central quest/ion then drop me a line and we can organise a zoom mentorship meeting to get you started in the right direction. If you’d like a full developmental edit, contact me HERE to arrange a booking. Slots are available from June 2027.

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I hope you’ve found this information helpful. Let me know how you go!

Lots of love

Edwina xx

Most photos are mine, but the pants photo is by Gay Liddington and the roses and angel are from Steven Vella

Our Feedback Retreat gang 2026!

What a great joy it is to host these retreats in Springbrook a few times a year. So many wonderful women writers and my beloved retreataholics who make these weekends so much fun! And it’s always a pleasure to hang out with author of Will I Ever Be Who I Am? and chief cookie, the warm and nurturing Gay Liddington who cooked up a storm with the help of the lovely Rebecca Hall this time round. My beautiful helpers and upcoming authors to watch Liana Brown and Natasha Cox always bring smiles and are a great help to us all. Love you girls! And the wise and wonderful Monique brings her in depth body knowledge which she shares with us in a movement session and with her incredible bodywork treatments to get those stressed out bodies back to full strength.

Sunshine shone bright and sparkly all weekend as we delved deep into the heart of our works-in-progress. It was cold up in the mountains but perfect weather for writing on a blanket under the giant trees listening to the whip birds. The sun was too good to miss so most of our workshops were held outside on the porch. Sun on our backs, pen in hand. What better way to spend a weekend?

We had a fabulous group of writers of all levels of experience, from multi-published authors to complete newbies finding their way into their first book. Workshops, feedback groups, excursions to the waterfall (watch out! That’s a big drop!) and of course workshops to help you find the heart of your story and ensure your reader will keep turning those pages.

Plus my favourite part of every retreat – collage. We leave words behind and play with images to create vision boards of the futures we’d like to create for ourselves. With our lovely “kindy photos” showing off what we’ve made.

These retreats are about a whole lot more than writing (though of course that’s a vital element). People arrive frazzled and worn out from all the many roles women must perform these days, exhausted and pale and a little shutdown. By Saturday I start to notice more smiles, colour returning to cheeks, sparks of light in those eyes that had seen too much, friendships forming, ideas taking flight and epiphanies for stories and life changes. By Sunday we are all on a high from being together. There is magic in groups of women! I’m sure of it.

This retreat was over the Lion’s Gate Portal and a rare alignment of multiple planets so we took advantage of this and did a special intention setting ceremony – walking the 8 – to help manifest all our writerly and personal goals.

And of course between yoga sessions and intention setting and writing workshops, and feedback groups and chatting – a lot of feasting was done! Delicious vegetarian meals and treats considering all dietary needs, prepared with love and joy that fed our bodies and our hearts. What a treat it is to be cooked for – to spend the day writing and just turn up the kitchen to fill our plates!

Highlights of this retreat were the sunshine and smiles of retreaters. Our Readings Night on Saturday showcased the great talent in the room, had us laughing and oohing and aahing, and closed with a powerful chant.

In my heart, in my soul

In my blood, in my bones,

I am a powerful woman.

Changing, emerging, powerful, magical

Free!

Original woman.

We sang together and thumped the table and the powerful energy rising was tangible . Wise women are rising around the world and we are a part of all that. Rise women rise!

Rebecca hadn’t been writing at all but wrote a beautiful haiku that told the story of her retreat.

Here’s what some retreaters had to say about the retreat

The Relax and Write Retreat was a fantastic experience – whether you wanted to take a break from creative process and reset or sequester yourself in your room and complete a draft. Ed is a knowledgable and encouraging mentor committed to supporting you, wherever you are in your writing journey. It couldn’t recommend it more!

Naomi Jeffrey (R & W retreater August 2026)

Edwina’s Relax and Write retreats are the perfect way to recalibrate, to immerse yourself in writing and indulge in some solitude while connecting with like-minded writers. The seamless transition from activities like yoga and workshops to quiet writing and gathering around a table of delicious food was exactly what I needed to still my head and let creativity flow. I would highly recommend this retreat for anyone who longs for a safe and nourishing environment where you can let go and just be yourself.

Jo Skinner (R & W retreater August 2026)

This is the second time I have attended this retreat, and I will be back! After struggling for some time to get back into my writing, this was the perfect opportunity to absorb the beautiful surroundings and support of other retreaters. This retreat is more than workshops (though they are incredible). Speaking to other writers, great food, quiet time all contribute to an amazing experience. You can even get massages!

Robyn Ede (R & W retreater August 2026)

A wonderful writing retreat that holds and nurtures you as you progress your success in writing and publishing.

Dolores Cummins (R & W retreater August 2026)

Really loved this retreat! It was just what I needed. Perfectly structured. I loved the fact we could come and go at our own pace. It was just bliss.

Caroline Moon (R & W retreater August 2026)

Edwina is a gifted and generous teacher. Great inspiration for moving forward.

Jill Moonie (R & W retreater August 2026)

You helped me break through a stuck and stagnant point. And done with loving community. Perfect! I leave refreshed and focused.

Retreat participant August 2026 (R & W retreater August 2026)

Retreat happy snaps!

Love these weekend intensive retreats. Lots of learning packed in, a stunning location and all close to home. With such wonderful women. Love them to bits!

Relax and Write Retreats will be back in 2027! About to update the retreats page.

MEMOIR AND LIFE WRITING RETREAT – SPRINGBROOK April 9 -11

Best for memoirists and those exploring writing or just wanting to join the tribe and write in their rooms!

FEEDBACK AND REVISION RETREAT – SPRINGBROOK August 6 -8

Best for those reviewing a draft (complete or not) or those stuck partway or for those who want to develop a new idea more fully and make a plan.

And that’s a wrap! I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again, these retreats are only as good as the women who come along, and this one was a beauty!!

Lots of love

Edwina 🙂