feedback and revision retreat

Our happy campers from the August Feedback and Revision Retreat 2024

What a treat to meet so many talented and inspiring writers and to help them tackle the dreaded second draft with some useful tools! With writers from their twenties to almost eighty we had libraries worth of shared wisdom to delve into to help each other make our projects the very best they can be.

We honed in on the themes and worked on scene lists to help us see more clearly the structural issues that needed to be addressed, before looking at cleaning up our prose and then learning about how to write a pitch and a synopsis. Lots of brainwork this retreat, with writers sharing their work in small feedback groups and/or receiving individual feedback with me, to help get those first few pages shining like beacons to potential publishers.

Look at that concentration!

But it wasn’t all hard work. We had yoga and breathing to relax and restore our bodies and minds, beautiful surroundings for walks and adventures, and of course, thanks to the Wonder Woman that is Gay Liddington lots of delicious nurturing food to keep our bellies full and our spirits happy. Gay’s own memoir Will I Ever Be Who I Am is being released early in 2025 – watch this space. Not just the best cook in the world, also a talented writer, brave advocate and healer through story. Food magician!

Plus our lovely special helpers, Liana and Natasha who did all the hard work of cleaning up. THANK YOU!

With our tummies and minds full, we were glad of the lovely, if cool, weather to take walks around the stunning location and refresh ourselves with the beauty of nature, listen to the birds and the sound of running water, leaves rustling in the wind, making friends with the little yellow robins hopping around the cabins and pademelons that bounded away when we got too close.

TESTIMONIALS
Here’s what retreaters had to say about their weekend of writing, yoga, feasting and friends.

‘A once in a lifetime retreat that won’t be my last!’ Selena Wallace August 2024

‘A very well organised retreat, beautiful peaceful surroundings and nurturing food. The writing sessions were informative, practical, relevant to writers of all stages and ages. Thank you for a fabulous weekend.’ Alina Hughes August 2024

‘I would encourage all those interested in writing, reading and a truly unique experience to come to a Relax and Write Retreat.’ Indrani Ganguly August 2024

‘A peaceful, beautiful place to connect with others and reconnect with yourself and to inspire better writing, but also to gain confidence moving forward. Beautiful location, excellent food and most of all, a truly inspiring group of women.’ Isabel Coe August 2024

‘This retreat was a wonderful opportunity to focus on my writing project in a relaxed supportive environment with like-minded women. Thanks Edwina for sharing your expertise and knowledge in such an open-hearted way.’ Jen Barrkman August 2024

‘The food was perfect! Nutritious, tasty, interesting and nurturing.’ Alina Hughes August 2024

The most magical part of these retreats is the connections made between writing friends who help and support each other to bring their creative babies to full and beautiful fruition in the world. Hooray for new writing buddies I say! THANK YOU to all the wonderful, wise, inspiring and creative women who make these retreats such a joy for me and Gay.

We work hard to make these retreats a nurturing and uplifting experience for all who attend but ultimately it is the open hearts, kindness and generosity of those who come along that create the magic we all enjoy. THANK YOU new friends! And old ones too 🙂

As is traditional, we finished our weekend full of words with some images, creating collages to open our eyes to the goodness coming our way.

UPCOMING RETREATS

Are you ready for a retreat?

Our next Springbrook Weekend Intensive is the Memoir and Life Writing Retreat 18 – 20 October. This retreat is perfect for those working on stories based on life and for new writers wanting to get started and finally get some stories out of their heads and onto the page. All the info HERE. Still a few places left but CONTACT EDWINA to make sure there is a place for you before booking.

And keep an eye on my UPCOMING RETREATS PAGE for retreats in 2025, including:

February 10 – 16 – Heavenly Hoi An – Vietnam Transformational Writing Retreat

April 4 – 6 SPRINGBROOK – Memoir and Life Writing Retreat

June 23 – 29 Blissful Bali – Bali Transformational Writing Retreat

August 8 – 10 SPRINGBROOK – Feedback and Revision Retreat

October 10 – 17 Incredible Italy – Italy Transformational Writing Retreat

November 7 – 12 Beautiful Byron Bay – Writing for Wellness Transformational Writing Retreat – info coming soon!

Want to know more? Just drop me a line!

We always have a wonderful time. I feel so lucky to get to run these retreats where I meet the very best kind of people — writers, dreamers, creators! THANK YOU!

Lots of love

Edwina xx

The view from our spectacular private lookout in Springbrook

Have you made it all the way to the end of your first draft? Most of the way? Or at least a bit, but then you got stuck? Need some help and motivation to move onto the next stage of writing? Do you like a deadline? Make this retreat the deadline for your first draft! Need to prepare pitch documents and figure out how, and where, to submit your work?

This retreat is for you!

This special retreat is for those with a bit of writing under their belts, looking for some advice and information on self-editing and structure. Get ready for your second draft!

Workshops are focused on:

Finding the themes and key messages of our stories and honing in on those in the manuscripts,
STRUCTURE – working out a structure that will support and enhance your plot and make it a compelling read.
Fixing your sentences. Get your head around the nitty-gritty of sentences and learn ways to clean up your prose to make it strong and vigorous.
Pitch to agents or publishers and learn how to write that dreaded synopsis.

Connect with other writers at a similar level and get useful advice and feedback on your work in progress in small feedback groups, or pay a little more for written feedback from Edwina and an individual session to talk through any issues you’re facing.

All in beautiful Springbrook in the Gold Coast hinterland with plenty of room to spread out and lie in the grass to write, or prop yourself up against a giant tree, or hole up in your room all weekend and just write your heart out without distraction. Ask questions and get all the answers you need from Edwina and the braintrust of attending writers. Have fun and relax. Stretch out with yoga every morning and let go of all your worries with deep breathing and relaxation techniques in the evening.

Explore the beautiful grounds, take long walks at the nearby National Parks, or wander down to our lookout and waterfall and rock hop your way to solitude in nature. Let the birdsong and rustle of leaves soothe you as you write and rewrite, then come sit by the fire and talk through any challenges with your project with other writers as you feast on Gay’s delicious home cooked meals and treats.

A weekend out of time, just for you and your story. You’ve been working hard on your book. Treat yourself to this weekend of connection and information, to help elevate your story and prepare it for publication.

THIS RETREAT IS ALL INCLUSIVE

All meals, workshops and accomodation in comfortable but basic single rooms with a desk and electric blankets for those cold winter nights are included, all for only $500 (early bird unwaged) or $650 (early bird – employed).

EARLY BIRD PRICES CLOSE 30 June 2024. BOOK YOUR PLACE NOW to avoid disappointment, places are already filling.

Check that spaces are available with Edwina first, then PAY YOUR $200 DEPOSIT before 30 June to secure early bird prices.

Any questions or to get the flyer, contact Edwina.

Come and join the fun and joy of connecting with other like-minded writing women. Make this August your time to have your first draft finished and reward yourself with this uplifting, informative and inspiring retreat!

Hope you can come!

Lots of love

Edwina xx