Screen writing tips and prompts

This semester I’m teaching screen writing at the University of Queensland.

When I started writing screenplays and learning about the genre about ten years ago now, I thought it looked pretty easy!

“What’s all the fuss?” I thought. “It’s just dialogue and some scene headings.” The formatting seemed to be the tricky bit. Turns out, formatting is easy – there are heaps of programs that do all the hard work for you. You can try them out for free and have a go yourself at writerduet and celtx.

These days I use Final Draft which is the programme most professionals I’ve met use.

The more I learn about screenplay, the trickier it gets. At its heart it’s an extremely minimal art from. The screenwriter creates only the scaffold of a story for hundreds of other people to add to, to manifest a fully fleshed out film.

Directors, producers, set designers, technicians of all sorts and, of course, the actors. So how can we get the movie we have in our heads onto the screen, with all these other people involved, while using the fewest words possible? That my friends is the art of screenplay!

All we have to work with is what the audience can see and hear. No thoughts, no telling about feelings. Everything at its heart comes down to either an object or setting we can visualise, or an action that SHOWS us what a character is thinking or feeling. Showing not telling, over and over again.

Remember these twins from The Shining?

WRITING PROMPTS

Here are a few quick prompts to help you get your head around what it is like to write for the screen, developing a character ONLY by what you can see and their actions.

1.

In five lines or less describe a character’s bedroom using specific details of things we can see, so that we get an idea of their character.

2.

Write a line of dialogue or two where a character tells us what they think of themselves, then show us them acting in a way that contradicts what they’ve said.

3.

Think of a way to show time passing, say we’ve gone from winter to spring, that isn’t cliched. Eg: no calendar pages falling away.

Have fun!

These exercises are great whether you want to write a screenplay or not. The more we can SHOW in our writing, the better.

Bring your stories to life using specific sensory details. Show us who your characters are by what they DO.

Good luck!

Lots of love, Edwina xx

Relax and Write In Paradise!

Put yourself in this picture! Escape the winter blues and join me and other like-minded women writers on beautiful Magnetic Island, off the coast from Townsville in North Queensland.

As the world continues to roll with the punches of Covid-19 (who else is feeling a little bruised?), there are still places of retreat and recovery where creativity is valued and time slows down to let you settle deeply into your writing, and yourself.

Come along and join the fun at RELAX AND WRITE IN PARADISE June 25 – 27 2021.

At Amaroo on Mandalay! Yes, a resort! No bunk beds here, but studio apartments with their own kitchenettes and bathrooms, singles, or bigger rooms for those who bring along a writing buddy.

Is your creative spirit crying out from some TLC? It’s been a crazy year, take some time out to cherish yourself and refill your tank.

Join a wonderful supportive group of women in a fun and safe environment discovering just how much some deep relaxation can ignite your imagination and get you writing again. Relax and unwind with gentle morning yoga sessions and get writing with innovative workshops that use yoga, and drama techniques to help move those stories out of your head and onto the page. 

The program includes two yoga sessions, dance night and four creative writing workshops. Whether you’re writing memoir, fiction or screenplays, these sessions cover the basics of character, dialogue and story development, as well as advice on editing and submitting your work. Two nights comfortable, airconditioned accommodation plus delicious vegetarian breakfasts and dinners are all included in the cost.

PRICES START at only $550 twin share!

Come along and join the fun, make new writing buddies and renew your love of writing. Contact me for more info and bookings.

HURRY! Repeat retreaters – or mermaids as they’re better known – have already snapped up a lot of spaces. Places are limited to a maximum of 15, so you get plenty of attention for your projects.

Don’t miss out on this luxury retreat at bargain prices. Contact me now to secure your place!

I am so looking forward to getting up to Magnetic Island and relaxing after the craziness of the last year and a bit. YAY! Not long now.

Early bird prices end tomorrow! DON’T DELAY! You can secure your place with a deposit and pay the rest later.

Hope you can make it 🙂

Lots of love

Edwina xx